Friday, October 19, 2007

God, oh God !!

If you are listening amidst your other important chores,
God, oh God!
Let me show you what you have done unto me!
Though the chances are slim I have your ears and eyes,
You should know how I have been mistreated with your lies.


Do you see the red flowing over my face,
God, oh God?
Spurted viscous straight from heart,
These eyes that followed you since they opened,
They blow blood now, you are guilty,
Are you going to cleanse or do them apart?

Let me tell you this is not fair,
Let me tell you I do dare,
Let me tell you I need a hand,
Let me tell you i cant even stand,
But do you listen,
God, oh God?
Or are you just the silent judge,
That hunts me down with a severe grudge?
And torment my soul craving for a hold,
For all I can see is distance and cold.

Thy light is supposed to guide me in the path,
But when it is all shadow, how do I know?

I am human,
A lesser soul compared to angels,
How long can I hold, how more need I suffer?
God, Oh God?
How more do I cry, How long before it is over?
Take me all at once, even without a nod,
But fill me with peace once, oh my lord!

If you exist, if you care,
If you live in water and air,
Listen to this child for it cries to you,
For love, for mercy and for solace,
God, oh God!
Tonight if I die in you, it is the end,
But tonight,
If you die in me, I am afraid it is a begining ..

4 Comments:

Anonymous Vidya said...

"Take me all at once, even without a nod,
But fill me with peace once, oh my lord!"


"Tonight if I die in you, it is the end,
But tonight,
If you die in me, I am afraid it is a begining .."

truly awesome it is.. i cried.. :( >:D<.

4:14 AM  
Blogger Aishwarya said...

If i'll have to pick out quotes from the poem, like Vidya did, the entire poem will be here now...

Your best piece ever!! But the poem disturbs me...

Hope things get better :)

8:55 PM  
Blogger madhumathi said...

Its like everything unspeakable in the depths of my heart have been said aloud....

wonderful poem.. very touchin..

5:27 AM  
Blogger AKSHAYA said...

simply superb..... is all i can say!!!
especially the last 2 lines.....absolutely awesome....


looking forward for many more...

5:51 AM  

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