self-introspection
man: isnt it unfair tat sm ppl r so hapy in life tho they havent done nythn 4r it and sm r so sad tho they deserve every bit of happiness?
voice: who sed lifez gona b fair? your very existence is by chance, so life isn't all tat predetermined and is definitely random. By all probablility, the chance of you being happy is less than one.
man: so why was i born then, if i don't serve a purpose?
voice: who said therez a purpose to ur life?
man: wel, i always thought so.
voice: hmmm, then there probably is.
man: u r confusin me
voice: oh, am i? wel, tats wat ppl always say, so tats nuthn new.
man: ok, so y aint i hapy now? am not sure if am sad, but i definitely aint happy.
voice: ask urself
man: arent u me?
voice: oh, am i?
man: now, u r confusin. shud i believe u exist?
voice: did i ever say i exist?
man: then who r you?
voice (mischievous): try to find out.
man: where?
voice: in you.
man: now, don gime tat, tat u exist inside me. i have filled myself with hate and they say god is love.
voice: one, who said am god? two, who said god is love? three, who are they?
man: you are good at asking questions, but answering is the tougher part. i thot here i am to ask questions and you came to answer.
voice: you think what you want. i did not come, i am always here.
man: where?
voice: here
man: huh, you are so tuf. ok, teme y ppl suffer?
voice: i don have an answer to tat. i thnk tz juz d way they live.
man: u don have an answer to tat? then u arent god.
voice: who said am god?
man: i thot so.
voice: did i ask you to think so?
man: ok, am wrong. but ...
voice (interruptin): have u ever been right?
man: i do not know.
voice: tz gud u r able to accept tat. not many mortals around thnk tat way.
man: oh, so u r immortal, as they say?
voice: ok, i have an answer for tat. i die with you, i aint immortal. and i have a question for tat, who are they?
man: i duno, tz juz they - my teachers, parents, people arnd me. they are the THEY.
voice: do u kno they all have voices inside? to which they are always answerable and they are never able to answer?
man: why?
voice: because they are all hypocrites.
man: am i too?
voice: are you?
man: i thnk so
voice: then u r.
man: is it wrong?
voice: wat is wrong? there isnt nythn called wrong or rite in life. tz juz d way u live and answer ur voice.
man: ok, v r movin frm d topic. y is life unfair?
voice: life is a chance, none said tz gona b fair.
man: do u thnk fallin in love is wrong?
voice: wat do u thnk?
man: i thnk it is.
voice: i agree. u shud always raise in love.
man: oh, tat bulshit? ok, do u thnk raisin in love is wrong?
voice: wat do u thnk?
man: i don thnk therez anythn called raisin in love. ppl only fall.
voice: have u fallen?
man: am getn up.
voice: gud
man: so?
voice: so?
man: y aint i able 2 sleep? y am i writin crap like d blog before this? i kno it isnt too rhyming, i kno tz al fuckshit, but y do i write?
voice: coz u cant always speak.
man: y cant i?
voice: coz other voices hear.
man: voices HEAR? i ddn kno tat.
voice: wel, they do. wen voices speak, people raise in love. wen people become untrue, they fall in love.
man: whch is beter?
voice: raising in love.
man: then y did i fall?
voice: other voices.
man: so, voices arent always gud?
voice: who said they are gud? remember the life is unfair thing?
man: o yea, so wat hapens 2 me?
voice: u juz move on n cary me wth u.
man: wil u b there always?
voice: as long as u can hear me.
man: til wen?
voice: til people listen to their voices, til they behave. til worlds dont discriminate. til people smile at each other, til enemies love, til u thnk lifez unfair. after tat, u don need me.
man: ok, wen wil tat b?
voice: i duno, remember u duno if am god.
man: u kno?
voice: al i kno is am not immortal.
man: so, u agree life is unfair?
voice: i wil leave it 2 urself to answer tat. one day, wen u cal out n i don answer, kno then, life has become fair. til tat, toil but live. and believe in charles darwin. d fittest survives.
man: gud nite
voice: whew! zzzzzzzzz ....
posted by sravan at
10:50 AM
7 Comments:
Very Good one dude...do this regularly and u will keep finding answers to ur questions only to get the next set and so on....and on ...and on....
good one. but ipdiye pona otitrukara 3 4 mudiyum kotirum.. [:p]..
nice write up.. 1st konjam mokkaiya irundhuchu.. as u go on, it was nice 2 read.. narration was gud..
keep it up..
un thangaachi.
Hey man, I liked this blog of yours. The idea behind it is good. You have a nice flow of thoughts.. "Rise in Love." Thats good to hear.
I reminds me of the Vikram and betal stories in which the major aspects of life are discussed in terms if questions and answers.
Why is your writing pre-dominantly circling around love and falling in it (a small change: "rising in love" looks like a nice concept..good job..)?
other than the subject matter which has been beaten to death and which doesnt mean much anymore (to me), thumbs up to the way you have conceived it. Good flow of ideas but not words (in some places they remind me of stupid crazy mohan style of dialogues..)
Sit down and write about something else too. If you claim that you are writing about whatever you are going through or observed, then this what I have to say..."Turn/Open your eyes and look at other things and then start writing about them in your good original style that you already possess.."
have a great day
bharath
thanks hemanth.
n yes, bharat, wil keep tat in mind 4r d next blogs :). keep visitin ..
life is filled with questions and its obviously pissing off when u dunno the answer but don waste time on that and missout on other things in life. in those ul find what ure looking for. well i sound like "voice", confusing but i hope u find ure answer in this!!!
cheers!
oh yea, everyone tat v meet has voices, so tz bound 2 b a prety confusin world arnd. tz al abt survival of d fittest. sometimes, it helps not 2 listen 2 our voice ;), tz as confused as v r :D
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